Kelpie, Nickern
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It had been more than a week since Aizen had ordered Ulquiorra to get the human friend of Ichigo Kurosaki. From the moment he had seen the woman, had he known she meant trouble. Orihime wasn’t scared anymore. After all, why should she be? One more time she would feel a shockwave of pain, but then it would be over – for good.

Bleach - Orihime Bleach - Ulquiorra
Orihime Inoue Ulquiorra Schiffer
Bleach - Gin
Bleach - Grimmjow
Bleach - Nnoitra Bleach - Aizen
Gin Ichimaru
Grimmjow Jaggerjaque
Nnoitra Gilga Sousuke Aizen



Bleach - Setting1
Bleach - Setting2
Bleach - Setting3 Bleach - Setting4

Authors notes:

It all started when I was in back in 2010 when I was on a family trip in Great Britten. After being in London we flew up to Belfast and it was here that I got the idea. When I’d packed before leaving home, I’d also put a bunch of new music on my MP3-player. As we arrived Belfast. the song that was played were “Burning” by Maria Arredondo, and since I was in the middle of watching ‘Bleach’, my mind connected the two instantly.

The rest of the trip I spent with my nose in my fateful notebook. The first chapter was written the first evening, and then completed on the train to Dublin.

As I wrote, this started in Belfast and in Dublin. Here I wrote two chapters and started on a third. When I got home I hurried to write it over on my computer, and I also finished the third chapter. And then school started… I had started on a forth chapter, but I guess there just wasn’t any more ‘English Juice’ in me, and it took a while before I got to publish the forth and the fifth chapter.

The plan was to continue from here, but for some reason I’d stopped writing. Not only on this story, but in general. I remember that I many times opened the document and read through it, but it just wouldn’t do any good. That was until I one day sat on my room at collage and suddenly go up the story. For some reason I was now able to write, and I managed to get the new chapter as good as done. I didn’t publish it though, not until later.

I guess you could say that I finally started writing actively again between Christmas and New Year 2013. I looked up my old stories, and decided to take a look on what people was most interested in – which clearly was ‘Burning’. In the process I found myself a Beta, and when I published chapter six, all the old chapters and the new had been worked on and fixed.

Many might think that one of the reasons I write this story is that I really like this pairing. Well, I guess you could say that’s true. I do love Ulquiorra, and I do love the two of them together, but wen it comes to Orihime… I honestly can’t stand her. Sorry, but I can’t help it. She belongs to a character stereotype that just is made for me to choke on. I’m not gonna ramble on about the steriotype, but you could say that it includes girls like: Orihime (Bleach), Hinata (Naruto), Serena/Usagi (Sailor Moon), Ichigo (Tokyo Mew Mew).

It’s kinda funny for me to think of this story. It’s kinda the story that is ‘my fist’ everything. It was my first long story, my first story with a darker theme, the first story that I’ve actually written that is T – and even some parts are M-rated. For those reasons, this story is special to me, and I guess that might be one of the reasons why I was so uncertain for a time. It’s my baby – the baby that people decided to actually give reviews on and follow.

Believe it or not, but I have close to no idea where this story is going. Sure, I have some moments that I want to include in the process, but nothing more than that really. I guess you might see this as stupid and unwise of me, and I might actually agree. Still, I’ve never been good at writing while following a plan. I actually did make one for chapter 8 – and well, no, it did not work. Instead of sticking to the plan, I ended up inventing a whole new character – Sabesion. Kinda funny right? Make a plan for Winny and she’ll be sure not to follow it. I don’t regret me doing so though – I kinda love that character – and I will make good use of him in future chapters. So yeah, basically I’m as curious to what’s gonna happen as you guys – only that I’m about a chapter ahead of you.

I made some pins while working on the story. Feel free to check them out:



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